This week’s focus was “Normal Life: As the protagonists know it.”
Ironically, real normal life went out the window. Storms knocked out electricity and the Internet from Wednesday evening to Thursday evening, followed by a power loss Saturday morning and brief black-outs Sunday.
To be blunt, I couldn’t access my novel, so I didn’t reach my goal.
The first two chapters are nearly perfect, including their titles: The Boy Who Wanted to Leave and The Girl Who Wanted to Stay. They set the pattern of switching points when the protagonists are separated.
The third chapter, which throws Favius into peril, is short and fast.
However, the fourth chapter is too long. I can distill Argenta’s actions into later dialogue, but it’s crucial to keep her interactions with key supporting characters. The reader needs to know them before Favius meets them – which is coming up.
Week Two: September 27
Inciting event for boy-protagonist. Meeting of protagonists. Inciting event for girl-character.